The Song That Ended (DRAFT)

So today I learned about Trimeric poetry.  I don’t know if I did it right but I like how it turned out and am presenting it here for your opinion.  It’s about a real kid and a real song and a real love we share.  I get such a kick out of him, and I think he does with me too.

Headed out to trick-or-treat tonight, but figured I’d leave you with this little gem. 

Enjoy!

The Song That Ended

There was a song I sang with him

That had no end

We’d sing on and on

And our voices would blend.

There was no end and it made us sing all the harder

If it bothered someone

We were none the wiser.

It was our song and we sang it non-stop with glee

My part, then his

We sang joyfully.

Blending our voices with joy, then, but the seeds were still sown

He’ll sing no more with me,

Now that he’s grown.

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